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4M - formal letters 1&2

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  • THREE mistakes: I like to know if I gonna make it whit the money.
    I would like / am going to make it / with
  • ONE mistake: But i can speak English very well.
    I
  • TWO mistakes: The last thing I want to know is how much it pays.
    would like to know / impolite: 'how much it pays'
  • THREE mistakes: If you are under eightteen you aren't aloud to buy alcohol.
    eighteen / are not / allowed
  • ONE mistake: ...that you offer volutery work.
    volunteer
  • ONe mistake: I am a 18-year-old girl from...
    an
  • ONE mistake: Can I also get some information about the paymenty? I look forward to hearing from you soon.
    Last line should be a separate paragraph.
  • ONE mistake: ...and to know how it feels to work in Engeland.
    England
  • ONE mistake: I have read the advertisement when I was searching on the Internet...
    Which advertisement?
  • ONE mistake: I'am a fifteen-year-old girl from Oudenbosch.
    I am
  • Londen
    London
  • FOUR mistakes: Here we can drink legaly if were 16-years-old.
    legally / when / we are / 16 years old
  • ONe mistake: I read your artikel about drinking problems.
    article
  • ONE mistake: So i found your article very relatable.
    I
  • ONE mistake: My name is Bob. I am a sixteen-year-old boy from...
    first ánd last name
  • ONE mistake: The article attracts me because I know that a lot of teens...
    appeals to me / speaks to me
  • FOUR mistakes: I think its a great idea, but I dont think its gonna work.
    it is / do not / going to
  • THREE mistakes: I already have working expireance because I have had a vacation work at the hospital.
    experience / I have / vacation job
  • TWO mistakes: The job is an excellant way to pay for my residance...
    excellent / residence
  • advertisment
    advertisement
  • TWO mistakes: I am very interessted on the job.
    interested / in the job
  • THREE mistakes: I am very good in englisch.
    good at / English
  • TWO mistakes: That's one of the reason I want the job.
    That is / reasons
  • TWO mistakes: Some people of my age drink to much and get drunk.
    Some people my age drink too much...
  • ONE mistake: Yours faithfully, Bob Mackinson.
    no name here
  • Dear Sir / Madam,
    Dear sir/madam,
  • ONE mistake: Can you send me some more information about the...
    Could
  • ONE mistake: ...this would be the perfect oppertunity to show how good I am at English.
    opportunity
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