Danny was exciting and scary when he drove the car
Danny was excited and scared when he drove the car. (Driving the car was exciting and scary).
My 15-year-old daughter is learning to drives.
My 15-year-old daughter is learning to drive.
He's father teached Danny about take apart engines.
His father taught Danny about taking apart engines.
Where Danny and his father lived?
Where did Danny and his father live?
Mr. Hazell didn’t polite to Danny when he pumped gas.
Mr. Hazell wasn't polite to Danny when he pumped gas.
I'm not agree that a man can't take care of babies.
I don't agree that a man can't take care of babies.
Why the author wrote about poaching in a children’s book?
Why did the author write about poaching in a children's book?
He found out his father fall into a pit.
... his father had fallen into a pit. (... his father fell into a pit.)
Danny’s father wants to poach so many pheasants that there will be any left for the party.
...there won't be any left for the party. OR there will be none left for the party.
My mom was very protector to me.
My mom was very protective of me.
The first time I drove, I was worried about I missed the right exit.
The first time I drove a car, I was worried about missing the right exit.
I like living in a caravan, because my families are with me. (VT, S/PL)
I would like living in a caravan, because my family would be with me
I very like movies, and I am watching movies almost every night.
I really like movies, and I watch movies almost every night. (OR I like movies a lot...)
My friends and me had too much fun at the party. I was a great evening. (PRON, WC)
My friends and I had a lot of fun... so much fun... (too much fun = negative)
When Danny was very young, his father let him drove cars into the workshop.
... let him drive cars...
When my first time to drive in the US, I was frightened by the speed of the other cars.
The first time I drove... , When I first drove in the US...
It was very exciting and scary to driving a car
It was very exciting and scary to drive a car
In chapter 9, Doc Spencer told his method of poaching pheasants.
...told Danny about his method...
This quote reminds me my childhood.
This quote reminds me of my childhood.
My job was to care about my grandparents’ chickens. (WC)
My job was to take care of my grandparents' chickens.
My mom was afraid to letting me alone at home.
My mom was afraid of leaving me alone at home. (OR ... letting me stay home alone.)
When I had 19 years old, I want to be an astronaut.
When I was 19 years old, I wanted to be an astronaut.