Most students expressed that due to the lack of sleep on school days, they tend to crash on the school’s couches.
Word choice: Crash [slang language]
Representation of persons of color in leadership positions remains disproportionately low in many industries.
Biased language
What is qualitative research?
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Parallel or not? Recommended exercise includes running, swimming, and cycling.
Parallel
Parallel or not? Scientists and meteorologists are currently studying storms and trying to find better ways of predicting them.
Parallel
Section of research paper which contains the research design,participants and instrument used in the study.
Methodology
Parallel or not? To go to school, to ride a bike, and spending time with friends were little things enjoyed.
Not parallel
He has been an asthmatic from childhood and was never able to play sports.
Word choice: asthmatic [biased language] (in academic writing, you cannot say that a person IS the illness)
What is cross-referencing?
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Direct question: Does Jen eat meat?
Embedded question: I'm not sure whether Jen eats meat or not.
What is quantitative research?
Timmy said the UFO he spotted was oblong in shape.
In shape (Wordiness)
Name 3 instruments for data collection
surveys, questionnaires, interviews, games, observations, etc
The other entries were returned back to their owners.
Word choice: Returned back (redundancy)
Parallel structure: Researchers studied the effects of sleep on memory and how it impacts concentration.
Not parallel
Parallel or not: There are two ways to get a promotion: working hard or make friends in high places.
Not parallel
Two examples of close-ended questions
multiple choice, multiple answers, scaled answers, etc.