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AEP Error Correction: Sentences

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  • I very like music, and I am playing the piano, guitar, and violin.
    word choice, verb tense: I like music a lot, and I play the piano, guitar, and violin.
  • After her father's company collapsed, her life was changed.
    CORRECT!
  • When I got home from work yesterday, I watched TV for an hour.
    CORRECT!
  • Because I got a new job I moved here about 10 months ago.
    Because I got a new job, I moved here about 10 months ago.
  • I had a class early this morning I woke up at noon.
    Run On: I had a class early this morning, but I woke up at noon. (OTHER OPTIONS?)
  • I'd like to go on a vacation, but I don't have any time right now.
    CORRECT!
  • Let me know if you need any help.
    CORRECT!
  • I want to go to San Francisco, I probably won't go.
    Run on (comma splice): Although I want to go to San Francisco, I probably won't go. (OTHER OPTIONS?)
  • He is tired he needs some sleep.
    Run-on: He is tired, so he needs some sleep. (OTHER OPTIONS?)
  • I living in Renton and in my free time I like to shopping and cooking.
    Verb tense, verb pattern, run on: I live in Renton, and in my free time I like shopping and cooking.
  • I work in the evenings; I get home at 9pm.
    CORRECT!
  • My birthday was last week but I didn't have a party.
    run on: My birthday was last week, but I didn't have a party.
  • My father, mother, and brother like talking and arguing about politics.
    CORRECT!
  • When I was about 5 years old, I was often sick, one time I coughed so much that I had asthma.
    Run on: several ways to fix
  • I like ride a bike because make me feel better and make my legs strong.
    I like to ride my bike because it makes me feel better and makes my legs strong.
  • Jack's mother is still alive she lives in London.
    RUN ON: Jack's mother is still alive, and she lives in London. (OTHER OPTIONS?)
  • William doesn't have a reliable car he needs to buy one.
    RUN ON: William doesn't have a relaible car; he needs to buy one. (OTHER OPTIONS?)
  • Although I speak Italian I hope to learn several other languages this year.
    RUN ON: Although I speak Italian, I hope to learn several other languages this year.