I like living in a caravan, because my families are with me. (VT, S/PL)
I would like living in a caravan, because my family would be with me
My mom was very protector to me.
My mom was very protective of me.
My mom was afraid to letting me alone at home.
My mom was afraid of leaving me alone at home. (OR ... letting me stay home alone.)
This quote reminds me my childhood.
This quote reminds me of my childhood.
My friends and me had too much fun at the party. I was a great evening. (PRON, WC)
My friends and I had a lot of fun... so much fun... (too much fun = negative)
My job was to care about my grandparents’ chickens. (WC)
My job was to take care of my grandparents' chickens.
When I had 19 years old, I want to be an astronaut.
When I was 19 years old, I wanted to be an astronaut.
My 15-year-old daughter is learning to drives.
My 15-year-old daughter is learning to drive.
I very like movies, and I am watching movies almost every night.
I really like movies, and I watch movies almost every night. (OR I like movies a lot...)
I'm not agree that a man can't take care of babies.
I don't agree that a man can't take care of babies.
He's father teached Danny about take apart engines.
His father taught Danny about taking apart engines.
Where Danny and his father lived?
Where did Danny and his father live?
Danny’s father wants to poach so many pheasants that there will be any left for the party.
...there won't be any left for the party. OR there will be none left for the party.
In chapter 9, Doc Spencer told his method of poaching pheasants.
...told Danny about his method...
He found out his father fall into a pit.
... his father had fallen into a pit. (... his father fell into a pit.)
When Danny was very young, his father let him drove cars into the workshop.
... let him drive cars...
