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English 18 Public

Grammar Corrections for AEP class

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I like ride a bike because make me feel better and make my legs strong.

I like to ride my bike because it makes me feel better and makes my legs strong.

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I very like music, and I am playing the piano, guitar, and violin.

word choice, verb tense: I like music a lot, and I play the piano, guitar, and violin.

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Because I got a new job I moved here about 10 months ago.

Because I got a new job, I moved here about 10 months ago.

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I'd like to go on a vacation, but I don't have any time right now.

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Although I speak Italian I hope to learn several other languages this year.

RUN ON: Although I speak Italian, I hope to learn several other languages this year.

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I living in Renton and in my free time I like to shopping and cooking.

Verb tense, verb pattern, run on: I live in Renton, and in my free time I like shopping and cooking.

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I work in the evenings; I get home at 9pm.

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He is tired he needs some sleep.

Run-on: He is tired, so he needs some sleep. (OTHER OPTIONS?)

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My birthday was last week but I didn't have a party.

run on: My birthday was last week, but I didn't have a party.

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When I was about 5 years old, I was often sick, one time I coughed so much that I had asthma.

Run on: several ways to fix

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When I got home from work yesterday, I watched TV for an hour.

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Let me know if you need any help.

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After her father's company collapsed, her life was changed.

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William doesn't have a reliable car he needs to buy one.

RUN ON: William doesn't have a relaible car; he needs to buy one. (OTHER OPTIONS?)

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Jack's mother is still alive she lives in London.

RUN ON: Jack's mother is still alive, and she lives in London. (OTHER OPTIONS?)

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My father, mother, and brother like talking and arguing about politics.

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