We use our phones to call people that we appreciate, check on our school work, have some breaks...
We use our phones to call people that we appreciate, check on our school work, have some breaks AND SO ON / AND SO FORTH / (,ETC.)
Famous people are icons who make a contribuition to the society
Famous people are icons who make a CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY
The first reason we admire famous people it's because of their amount of money.
The first reason we admire famous people IS because of their amount of money.
Currently in the world are a lot of type of celebrities, singers, football players...
Currently THERE are a lot of typeS of celebrities, SUCH AS, singers, football players AND SO ON / SO FORTH (,ETC)
As I see it, the majority of people want to be like celebrities
As I see it, MOST of people want to be like celebrities
On one hand, I think is important to have someone to admire
On THE one hand, I think IT is important to have someone to admire
That is why people knows a lot of things about the celebrities
That is why people KNOW a lot of things about CELEBRITIES
Moreover, there is people who find their work inspirational. In this way, they follow their advice.
Moreover, there ARE people who find their work inspirational. THEREFORE, they follow their advice.
With the pass of the years, new profiles of famous people have emerged.
OVER the years, new profiles of famous people have emerged.
Everyone want to be a celebrity
Everyone wantS to be a celebrity
The news are always publishing about the celebrities
THE MEDIA IS always publishing about CELEBRITIES ON THE NEWS
We can't pretend childrens or teenagers to know some historical heroes
We CANNOT EXPECT CHILDREN or teenagers to know ABOUT some historical heroes
Why humanity admire this kind of popular heroes?
Why DOES humanity admire this kind of popular people?
To have people always talking about you, judging you, pointing you, is harder than it looks.
HAVING people always talking about you, judging you, pointing AT you, is harder than it MAY SEEM.
We admire some famous people or we are gelous of their lifes
We admire some famous people or we are Jelous of their liVes
There are famous people that only are famous because are rich or her family are famous.
There are famous people that are famous ONLY because THEY are rich or BECAUSE THEIR family IS famous.
