Thank you so much for looked for my home!
Thank you so much for LOOKING AFTER my home
During this two weeks in Paris, I did a lot of thinks
During THESE two weeks in Paris, I did a lot of THINGS
When I arrived to the airport, the fly company had lost my bags
When I arrived AT the airport, the FLIGHT company had los my bags
In the village there was a lot of people
In the village THERE WERE a lot of people
Other day we did friends and we passed our holidays with their.
ANOTHER day we MADE friends and we SPENT our holidays with THEM.
I'm in home now.
I'm AT home now.
We could meet for eat something.
We could meet TO eat something.
I did a lot of tourism in New York.
I WENT SIGHTSEEING all over the place
We visited a lots of places: the Big Ben, St Paul's Cathedral, the London Eye...
We visited A LOT / LOTS of places: the Big Ben, St Paul's Cathedral, the London Eye, ETC.
It was the best trip that i do in my life
It was the best trip that I HAVE GONE/DONE in my life
There're a lot of shops in New York
There ARE a lot of shops in New York
I stayed in a 5 stars hotel
I stayed in a 5-STAR-HOTEL
When writing an email, can you say an ENDING PHRASE?
BEST REGARDS / BEST WISHES / KIND REGARDS / SINCERELY
The hotel was so comfortable and all the people was very kind
The hotel was so comfortable and EVERYONE was very kind / ALL PEOPLE WERE
I think that I didn't see you for two years
I think that I HAVEN'T SEEN you for two years
We can meet in the coffe next wednesday
We can meet in A CAFÉ next Wednesday
