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Hi Liz, how are you ? I go to a nice village last week and the trip was great.
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I went on a five-days trip to Da Nang with my cousins.
five-days --> five-day
We travelled with plane to Nha Trang and then caught a taxi to Da Nang.
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I and my cousins were so exciting about the trip that we didn't feel tired at all.
exciting --> excited
We stayed in a hotel near the beach, but we didn't have to spend much time going to the beach. We could walk to the beach in 1 minute only. How cool !
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The rooms in the hotel was clean and big.
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We could watches the sunset and sunrise when we stood on the balcony.
watches --> watch
The restaurant was great, too. It served alot of seafood.
alot --> a lot
The seafood was delicous.
delicous --> delicious
While we had lunch on the last day of our trip, somebody broke into my room.
had --> were having
My mobile stole, so I was very shocked.
stole --> was stolen
A short while later, the polices arrived and interviewed the hotel employees.
polices ---> police
In the end, there weren't any useful information, so the police officers couldn't arrest anyone.
weren't --> wasn't
I'm looking forward to visit your house in the summer. I have many things to tell you.
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