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Dear Sir / Madam,
Dear sir/madam,
TWO mistakes: Some people of my age drink to much and get drunk.
Some people my age drink too much...
ONE mistake: So i found your article very relatable.
I
FOUR mistakes: Here we can drink legaly if were 16-years-old.
legally / when / we are / 16 years old
ONE mistake: My name is Bob. I am a sixteen-year-old boy from...
first ánd last name
ONE mistake: ...this would be the perfect oppertunity to show how good I am at English.
opportunity
ONE mistake: Yours faithfully, Bob Mackinson.
no name here
ONE mistake: I have read the advertisement when I was searching on the Internet...
Which advertisement?
advertisment
advertisement
ONE mistake: Can I also get some information about the paymenty? I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Last line should be a separate paragraph.
ONE mistake: I'am a fifteen-year-old girl from Oudenbosch.
I am
TWO mistakes: I am very interessted on the job.
interested / in the job
TWO mistakes: The job is an excellant way to pay for my residance...
excellent / residence
THREE mistakes: I already have working expireance because I have had a vacation work at the hospital.
experience / I have / vacation job
ONE mistake: Can you send me some more information about the...
Could
ONE mistake: ...that you offer volutery work.
volunteer
