(vt): Water pollution was a big issue here nowadays.
Water pollution is a big issue here nowadays.
(s/v): Firstly, increasing fines for businesses that illegally release waste or toxic waste into the river are a key step.
(s/v): Firstly, increasing fines for businesses that illegally release waste or toxic waste into the river is a key step.
(s/v): the administration need to have a solution about the situation of excess rubbish.
(s/v): the administration needs to have a solution about the situation of excess rubbish.
(s/v): It contaminate the health of those living near industrialized areas and animals in nearby rivers.
(s/v): It contaminates the health of those living near industrialized areas and animals in nearby rivers.
(art + / + wf) Circular economy is strongly benefits consumers by save them money, as they don't always buy new products.
The circular economy strongly benefits consumers by saving them money, as they don't always buy new products.
(2 x s/v): The key point here are that we needs to make recycling more accessible and easier.
The key point here is that we need to make recycling more accessible and easier.
(3 x errors - s/v, vt, s/v): Due to poor awareness, citizens is dump trash from the streets into lakes, which make the environment look terrible and extremely dirty.
Due to poor awareness, citizens are dumping trash from the streets into lakes, which makes the environment landscapes look terrible and extremely dirty.
(active sentence error): What measures should the government are take to protect the environment and habitats of animals?
What measures should the government take to protect the environment and animal habitats.
(^ x 2) I hope my suggestions will useful for you and hope you have an effective solution this problem.
I hope my suggestions will be useful for you and hope you have an effective solution to this problem.
(vt): The government needed to ban the disposal of waste into rivers in the future.
(vt): The government needs to ban the disposal of waste into rivers in the future.
(/ + wf + vt): It’s negative affected our lives.
It negatively affects our lives.
(vt): Pollution became a major issue in recent years.
Pollution has become a major issue in recent years.
(vt + s/v): Once these problems was solved, we will need to ensure that they doesn't happen again in the future.
Once these problems have been/are solved, we will need to ensure that they don't happen again in the future.
(/ + wf) The government should to helping local communities have access to better recycling centres.
The government should help local communities have access to better recycling centres.
(/ + wf + s/v) Individuals are needs to take more responsible for their actions.
(/ + wf + s/v) Individuals need to take more responsibility for their actions.
(/ + wf) If we want to reduce waste, more people is need to have more aware of the problem.
If we want to reduce waste, more people need to have more awareness of the problem.
