Sentence error correction PWT2 - session 2 | Baamboozle - Baamboozle

English 11 Public

Correcting basic errors in sentences

Study Slideshow

To build a nutritional diet it takes a lot of time, money and effort. (/)

To build a nutritional diet takes a lot of time, money and effort.

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So beside practice exercise the government should open a nutrition lesson day. (pl & wf & p)

So besides practicing exercise, the government should open a nutrition lesson day. (p & wf)

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First solution is educating children about healthy food. (art)

The first solution is educating children about healthy food.

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Fast fashion has short lifespan. (art)

Fast fashion has a short lifespan.

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Fashion is more important to younger people. Because they enjoy show off their new clothes and follow the latest trends. (FRAG & wf)

Fashion is more important to younger people, because they enjoy showing off their new clothes and follow the latest trends.

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Fast fashion is good because it very cheap and fashion. (^ & wf)

Fast fashion is good because it is very cheap and fashionable.

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The fashion is more important for younger people. (art)

Fashion is more important for younger people.

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Almost older people do not care too much about fashion. (^)

Almost all older people do not care too much about fashion.

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I think that fast fashion is more important to younger people. Because they are very sensitivity to fashion trends. (FRAG & wf)

I think that fast fashion is more important to younger people because they are very sensitive to fashion trends.

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Fast fashion is bad because it is expensive, waste clothes and causing environmental damage. (s/v & wf)

Fast fashion is bad because it is expensive, wastes clothes and causes environmental damage.

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Although fast fashion makes clothes cheaper, but it also causes much damage to the environment. (/)

Although fast fashion makes clothes cheaper, it also causes much damage to the environment.

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