Me and my brother have had a very good connection since I was 3!
My brother and I
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My brother and I found our favorite show then, it was Disney, and cartoon network.
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I noticed my brother wasn't coming, for that reason I look out of the window and saw him playing around in the garden.
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She told me that she came there every single day to see my brother before his surgery, it went on for 28 days straight, and every day there was at least 1 surgery.
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Have you ever wondered about being excellent in other’s nightmares would feel like?
Have you ever wondered what being excellent in other’s nightmares would feel like?
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As a result, they had high grades in no exams, some of them even under 5.
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I got a questionnaire “what power makes my younger sister get out as fast as lightning?
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I remembered in 7th grade, my homeroom teacher was a geography teacher, who was a new teacher in our school.