It is really tiring to read a book on a laptop. [Use '-ed' adjectives for subjective feelings and (usually) '-ing' adjectives for objective causes.
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thief
Give points!
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fairy
Take points!
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fairy
Take points!
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banana
Go to last place!
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i took a walk in central park and saw a Mime, who was pretending to be a Policeman, get sprayed with mace by an elderly woman because she thought he was trying to steal her purse.
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thief
Give points!
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gift
Win 25 points!
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shark
Other team loses 20 points!
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baam
Lose 25 points!
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The iron is a useful metal.
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There are others reasons.
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I have a wide variety of supernatural powers, but wish I had the power to go out in the daylight.
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lifesaver
Give 10 points!
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star
Double points!
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rocket
Go to first place!
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banana
Go to last place!
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He is one of those athletes who practices twenty hours a day.
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We must rely on the science for the progress.
Avoid 'the' when speaking about general terms
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โWhen you are courting a nice girl, an hour seems like a second. When you sit on a red-hot cinder, a second seems like an hour. Thatโs relativity,โ said Einstein.
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In the contrary, zoos allow for research into key issues surrounding animal welfare.
On the contrary...
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She grabs my hand then flipped me like I weighed nothing. This showed what a good self-defense course has done.
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I enjoy walking alone in the woods at night because I never what I will meet while I am out there in the dark.
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They hunt animals for live.
They hunt animals to live. [If expressing a purpose, use 'to' + infinitive.]