I have a wide variety of supernatural powers, but wish I had the power to go out in the daylight.
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In case you were wondering I never allow myself to be exposed to direct sunlight unless I have my scarf, my sunglasses, and a large umbrella.
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They hunt animals for live.
They hunt animals to live. [If expressing a purpose, use 'to' + infinitive.]
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I understand that vampires and ghouls need love but I donโt think they really understand just how attached I am to my vital, bodily fluids.
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We had a test I did well on it grammar is my forte.
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i took a walk in central park and saw a Mime, who was pretending to be a Policeman, get sprayed with mace by an elderly woman because she thought he was trying to steal her purse.
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The iron is a useful metal.
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It is really tired to read a book on a laptop.
It is really tiring to read a book on a laptop. [Use '-ed' adjectives for subjective feelings and (usually) '-ing' adjectives for objective causes.
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On my vacation to France, I went to Pares and visited the Eifel Tower, the Louvre museum, and Jim Morrisonโs grave.
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When Darth Vader and Luke Skywalker were battling with their light sabers, he became angry.
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Reading Camusโs The Plague.
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In the contrary, zoos allow for research into key issues surrounding animal welfare.
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Fossil fuels include coal, oil or natural gas.
Fossil fuels include coal, oil and natural gas. ['Or' is used for alternatives, i.e. usually one but not all the options.]