Show rather than tell . ( The pizza was delicious. )
Mushrooms and pepperoni sausage were layered thickly on top of one another while the white mozzarella cheese bubbled over the bright red tomato sauce .
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Show rather than tell. --> The boy was happy.
Jack had a big smile stretched from ear to ear as his blue eyes glistened with joy.